a magical journey fictiononlyreader

A Magical Journey

• 1287.3k Words
• 2 Followers
• Supernatural

Contents 437 Chapters

• #1 Start 20 March 2022 2.7k
• #2 Come On, Magic! 20 March 2022 3.1k
• #3 Initial Progress 20 March 2022 2.8k
• #4 Change in Magic, World Tour 20 March 2022 3.7k
• #1 Start 2.7k words
• #2 Come On, Magic! 3.1k words
• #3 Initial Progress 2.8k words
• #4 Change in Magic, World Tour 3.7k words
• #5 Book Collection, The Old Man 2.8k words
• #6 The First Lesson 2.8k words
• #7 Detection Layer 3.1k words
• #8 Defensive Shield 3.5k words
• #9 Secret Revealed 2.7k words
• #10 Building A Mindscape 3.2k words
• #11 Potion Brewing, Memory Books 2.9k words
• #12 End of Lessons, Day With Lia 3.2k words
• #13 Legilimency, Aiming for GOAT 3.1k words
• #14 Letters Arrive, The Decision 3k words
• #15 Last Lesson, Gringotts 3.1k words
• #16 Diagon Alley, The Wand 3.5k words
• #17 Political Landscape 3.2k words
• #18 Platform 9 , Express, Castle 3.1k words
• #19 Sorting, Hat, Dormitory 3.5k words
• #20 First Impressions, Problem 3.5k words
• #21 The Change, and the RoR 3.3k words
• #22 End Of The First Year 2.8k words
• #23 Duelling, The Request 2.9k words
• #24 Potters, Twins, and AID 3k words
• #25 Hogwarts Express Once More 3.3k words
• #26 New Prof, Prediction Party 3.1k words
• #27 Rant, and The New Base 3.2k words
• #28 Recon, and the First Client 3.6k words
• #29 Changing Events, New Quest 3.4k words
• #30 Troll Hunting, Memory Readin 3.6k words
• #31 First Riddle, Stones Chamber 3.4k words
• #32 Mirror Of Erised 3.3k words
• #33 Ball, Fudge, Greengrass 3.4k words
• #34 Malfoys, and Dancing 3k words
• #35 Vault Entry, Icy Corridor 3.5k words
• #36 Recovery, Plan Rage 3.1k words
• #37 Blood Magic 3.4k words
• #38 Ice, Cold Ice, Freezing Ice 3.3k words
• #39 Notes Publication 3.2k words
• #40 Important Clients 4k words
• #41 Absolute Zero, Prof Visit 3.4k words
• #42 Ending The Year Positively 3.2k words
• #43 House Cup, Dark Lord's Life 3k words
• #44 The Sales Pitch 3.6k words
• #45 Fax Machine, Monopoly, Omake 2.9k words
• #46 Upcoming Year, Testing Wards 3.3k words
• #47 Thestrals, and Carriage Ride 3.1k words
• #48 Lovegood, Icy Vault Revisit 3.3k words
• #49 Second Riddle, Lockhart 3.7k words
• #50 Weaslette, and Merch Profits 3.2k words
• #51 Oil of Green Revenge 3.1k words
• #52 Hallowe'en and Symbols 3.1k words
• #53 Cipher Decoding, and Descent 3k words
• #54 Unknown, and Commentary 3.2k words
• #55 Engraver, and Duelling Club 3.3k words
• #56 Quinn vs Tracy, Parseltongue 3.1k words
• #57 Harry Potter and Tom Riddle 3.1k words
• #58 Teaching the Slytherin Duo 3.2k words
• #59 Polyjuice Incident, and Debt 3.3k words
• #60 Ivy's HeirOfSlytherin Theory 3.2k words
• #61 The Break-In At AID 3.4k words
• #62 Lambs and The Devil 4.5k words
• #63 Into The Chamber of Secrets 3.3k words
• #64 Descent Into Madness 2.5k words
• #65 Madness, Chaos, and Silence 3.6k words
• #66 Grandfather-Grandson Talk 3.8k words
• #67 De-petrified, Marauder's Map 3.9k words
• #68 Payment, Simple, Back Home 3.1k words
• #69 Home, Potion, and Cure 3.2k words
• #70 Aftermath 3.3k words
• #71 Road To Recovery, Closure 3.7k words
• #72 Family Time, Conversations 3.2k words
• #73 Mix of Light and Dark 5.3k words
• #74 Another Year, Another Ride 3.2k words
• #75 Dementors and Chocolate West 3.5k words
• #76 Quinn's Trust In Magic 4.8k words
• #77 New System In Place 2.8k words
• #78 Third Vault, Faction Trouble 3.8k words
• #79 Neptune, Scheme, and Boggart 3.7k words
• #80 New Hiring, Hogsmeade Attack 4k words
• #81 Patronus vs Dementors 3.2k words
• #82 Fifth Element, and Squid 3.3k words
• #83 First Expedition, Growth 3.7k words
• #84 Illusion Of Help 3.5k words
• #85 Aquatic Showdown, & Exposed! 3.1k words
• #86 Hosting Slytherins, Wormtail 3.4k words
• #87 Third Time, Fail to Succeed 3.1k words
• #88 Entering The Third Vault 3.1k words
• #89 Kraken's Approval, Gym Buddy 3.7k words
• #90 Baby Steps Against Whirlpool 3.2k words
• #91 Healing Teacher, Get! 3.5k words
• #92 Confrontation With Gryffs 3.3k words
• #93 Conquering Poseidon's Wrath 2.6k words
• #94 Tehom, Alchemy, Sub-Zero 3k words
• #95 Tehom's Trap, Plagiarising 4.2k words
• #96 Aurors, Hit Wizards, Raid 2.9k words
• #97 Sonar, Bout, Tehom's End 3.4k words
• #98 Hadal Encumbrance, Apologize 2.9k words
• #99 Golden Boy Comes Visiting 4.5k words
• #100 Hogsmeade Surprise 4.2k words
• #101 Trials, Friendships, Rat 3.4k words
• #102 Deal Of Friendship! 3.6k words
• #103 Leviathans Underpass, Raven 3.2k words
• #104 Repayments and Negotiations 3.6k words
• #105 Jumping Back In Time 3.9k words
• #106 Horde, Time, Free Will 3.7k words
• #107 Slip, Hoverboard, Leader 3.1k words
• #108 Getting Better By Learning 3.5k words
• #109 Visions, Water, Reactions 4.4k words
• #110 Music, Scheme, Promise 3.5k words
• #111 Cure, Dreams, Another Deal 3.4k words
• #112 Infiltration and Kidnapping 3.4k words
• #113 Three-Way Mexican Standoff 3.7k words
• #114 Potter's Reaction, Choices 3.3k words
• #115 Preparations and Warm-Up 4.3k words
• #116 The Talk And The Events 4.2k words
• #117 Invite, Interrogation, Talk 3.8k words
• #118 Year End, Platform, Reunite 5.3k words
• #119 Start Of The Summer 3.5k words
• #120 Greengrass Family Visit 4.1k words
• #121 Q West Arrives At Denmark 3k words
• #122 Art Of Apparition 3.8k words
• #123 Mastering, Plans, Dreams 3.2k words
• #124 Exploring, Norse, Squabble 4.1k words
• #125 Times To Come, Limax Group 3.2k words
• #126 The West Family 3.8k words
• #127 Knights Bus, Godrics Hollow 3.4k words
• #128 An Evening With The Potters 4.9k words
• #129 Leap in Photo 4.2k words
• #130 WorldOfLight 2.9k words
• #131 Azkaban Duo, Lovegood House 4.4k words
• #132 Fury Of Noir 3.4k words
• #133 Tetani Nervum 3.1k words
• #134 As Night Sets 3.5k words
• #135 Arrival, FakeEye, Triwizard 6.2k words
• #136 DADA, Unforgivable, Prefect 3.6k words
• #137 Eleven Years, Trifecta, 4th 2.9k words
• #138 F-Forest, Centaurs, UndrWrld 3.4k words
• #139 Imposter, Delegation Prep 3.3k words
• #140 Tournament Prep, Consult 3.1k words
• #141 Arrival of Delegations 3.7k words
• #142 Performance, Goblet of Fire 3.4k words
• #143 Prevention, Unknown Events 3.2k words
• #144 4 Champs, Entering The Dark 3.3k words
• #145 Argog, The Other Tournament 2.9k words
• #146 Body Magic, Lapel Badges 3.2k words
• #147 Buzzing of An Annoying Bug 3.1k words
• #148 How a West Closes a Deal 3.2k words
• #149 Signing Krum Providing Help 2.9k words
• #150 Troll's Eye, Best Allies 3.5k words
• #151 TrainingGo, 2CharmingPeeps 3.2k words
• #152 Meeting With Vendors 2.9k words
• #153 West Siblings Roam Hogwarts 3.3k words
• #154 Big Sister Lia WEST 3.4k words
• #155 As I Thought 3.2k words
• #156 Seven Rings of Beginning 3.7k words
• #157 Dogs and Slumber 3.8k words
• #158 Blinding and Ropes 3.1k words
• #159 Results, The Book, Its Back 3.4k words
• #160 Captain Selection 3.5k words
• #161 Independent Contractors 3.1k words
• #162 Wonders of Body Magic 3k words
• #163 Altar, Beelzebub's Crawlers 3.6k words
• #164 Babel, and Opening Day 3.1k words
• #165 The Game and The People 3.1k words
• #166 Boys and Girls — It's Time 3.2k words
• #167 Rejections and Rejection 3.2k words
• #168 Two Girls & Asking Her Out 3.1k words
• #169 Awkwardness & Suits 3.2k words
• #170 Christmas Day and Gifts 3.1k words
• #171 The Start 3.3k words
• #172 Dancing Begins 3.2k words
• #173 Red, Fun, Kiss 3.2k words
• #174 Yuletide End, Possibility 3.7k words
• #175 Runic Marble, BG Politics 3.1k words
• #176 Bagman, Skeeter, Hostage 3.4k words
• #177 Second Task, Drone 3.3k words
• #178 Rescuing The Damsel 3.2k words
• #179 Catching The Eye 3.1k words
• #180 Rune Fix, Black Meets West 2.9k words
• #181 Brief, Morning, and Duel 3.2k words
• #182 Finals, Life, Crash 3.1k words
• #183 Rewards, Curses, Ravens 3.2k words
• #184 Ritual, Special, Separate 3.1k words
• #185 Chapter 185 3.2k words
• #186 Third Task 3.3k words
• #187 Revival, Rebirth, Return 3.5k words
• #188 Waking-Up, Recap, Reveal 3.2k words
• #189 Reason, Invite, Going Home 3.1k words
• #190 Home & Dark Reunion 3.6k words
• #191 Going Around, A Letter 3.3k words
• #192 GGrassDinner, Warning Visit 3.6k words
• #193 QWASPP Again, Vacation Time 3k words
• #194 Italy, I'm here! 3.3k words
• #195 Meeting The Abates 3.3k words
• #196 Empyrean, Following Dreams 3.6k words
• #197 Conspiracies Afoot 3.2k words
• #198 Got you! Or did you? 3.8k words
• #199 The Italian Climax 3k words
• #200 Party Rules 3.4k words
• #201 War & Love 3.3k words
• #202 Three, Two, One SIX! 3.5k words
• #203 First Lesson 3.7k words
• #204 The Oldest One, Bird Group 3.2k words
• #205 Educational Decree - 23 3.2k words
• #206 Architect's Puzzle 3.2k words
• #207 Architects Vault, CatVsToad 2.6k words
• #208 Meeting For The Future 4.2k words
• #209 Agreement To Join 3.2k words
• #210 Educational Decree - 24 4k words
• #211 Putting DA into RoR 3.2k words
• #212 First-Day Duels 3k words
• #213 1stDayDuels Cont 3.1k words
• #214 Round Two? Undefeated 3.8k words
• #215 Wall's Secrets, DA Reps 3k words
• #216 Fooking Records! 3.5k words
• #217 Style&Imagination 3k words
• #218 The Vault is a Vault 3.3k words
• #219 Petty Ban, Temper, Locked 3.4k words
• #220 Race Against Time 3.8k words
• #221 Respectfully Suggesting 3.2k words
• #222 A Spy In Pink 2.9k words
• #223 Family' BlackSheep 3.3k words
• #224 Second Room, Winter Break 3k words
• #225 Christmas Ball Once Again 3.3k words
• #226 Part-Duo 2.9k words
• #227 Decree Wave, Spinning Web 3.1k words
• #228 Lonely Fortress On The Isle 3.1k words
• #229 The Second Break-In 3.2k words
• #230 Giving A Private Tour 3.1k words
• #231 Force Of Emotion 3.4k words
• #232 Date Time, Surprise Visit 3.7k words
• #233 First Half 3.1k words
• #234 Second Half 2.8k words
• #235 Second Wave, First Firing 3.1k words
• #236 Ensuring Secrecy The OldWay 3.6k words
• #237 Piping Pressure 3.2k words
• #238 The Stoney Struggle 3.5k words
• #239 Aid In Distress 3.1k words
• #240 The Time of Quinn & Quill 3.5k words
• #241 Bones, DMLE, Difference 3.3k words
• #242 Tough Temptation Turmoil 3.1k words
• #243 Trial of DoloresUmbridge 1 3k words
• #244 Trial of DoloresUmbridgePt2 4.9k words
• #245 Factional Aftermath, Reopen 3.1k words
• #246 Quidditch Cup Finals 3.8k words
• #247 Professor Of DADA 2.6k words
• #248 Stigweard Gragg's Legacy 3.3k words
• #249 Closing Page 3.3k words
• #250 The End-Of-Year Examination 2.5k words
• #251 The Event On The Horizon 2.5k words
• #252 Plan Unfolds 3k words
• #253 The Clash Of Supernovas 3k words
• #254 Second Private Tour 3.2k words
• #255 Aegis 2.5k words
• #256 Flight & Gringotts 2.8k words
• #257 Selling To The Goblins 3.4k words
• #258 Arriving At Switzerland 2.9k words
• #259 Monolith 2.2k words
• #260 Class Of Elite 2.9k words
• #261 Meeting The Broker 2.3k words
• #262 An Inspired QWASPP 2.5k words
• #263 Diagon Alley Outing 3k words
• #264 Return Of Noir 3.1k words
• #265 Return Of Noir, Pt 2 2.4k words
• #266 Brandishing The Shovel 3.2k words
• #267 Meeting Mr Boyfriend 2.5k words
• #268 The Next In Line 3.1k words
• #269 The First Hunt 3.3k words
• #270 Meeting At Cirkus 3.8k words
• #271 The Last Train 2.5k words
• #272 Slug Club 3.6k words
• #273 The Last Opening Feast 2.4k words
• #274 Start Of The Transition 2.9k words
• #275 Moving Towards The Future 2.6k words
• #276 First Of Two Subjects 2.8k words
• #277 An Unusual Morning 2.7k words
• #278 The Failed Assault 2.7k words
• #279 Returning To S— 2.5k words
• #280 Ah I should— 2.1k words
• #281 BFF 2.6k words
• #282 The Necklace's Curse 2.3k words
• #283 Laying Subtle Claim 2.2k words
• #284 Council of Ghosts 3k words
• #285 End Of An Era 2.8k words
• #286 Gifts Galore 2.2k words
• #287 New Years At Black 2.3k words
• #288 The Second Hunt 2.1k words
• #289 Last Day Of The Year 2k words
• #290 An Offer To Help 2.2k words
• #291 The Tales of Three Brothers 2.3k words
• #292 A Calm Talk 2.2k words
• #293 The Room Of Hidden Things 2.1k words
• #294 The US of A 2.6k words
• #295 Restaurant Astier 3k words
• #296 Reunited In America 2.2k words
• #297 Introducing The Fable 2.1k words
• #298 Before The Answer 2.2k words
• #299 Truth Of The Matter 2.1k words
• #300 This is Sparta! 2.3k words
• #301 The Clinker's Shop 3k words
• #302 Return & Turmoil 2.2k words
• #303 The Weight Of Feelings 2.2k words
• #304 G's t 2.7k words
• #305 Damon 2.1k words
• #306 Quinn vs Damon 2.4k words
• #307 Meeting of Wests 2.1k words
• #308 Conversation Between Two 2.4k words
• #309 It Had To Be This Way 2.2k words
• #310 The Second Coming of Balbh 2.7k words
• #311 Convergence 2.9k words
• #312 The Second Rise 2.5k words
• #313 Superbia 2.3k words
• #314 Acedia & Arrival 2.3k words
• #315 Wrath & Confrontation 3.4k words
• #316 Regaining Control 2.2k words
• #317 Invidia 2.1k words
• #318 The Astronomy Tower 2.1k words
• #319 The Unbreakable Vow 2k words
• #320 The Broken Vow 2.4k words
• #321 The Half-Blood Prince 2.1k words
• #322 Farewell 2k words
• #323 Luxuria 2.1k words
• #324 Desire Taking Control 2.3k words
• #325 The Dead Prince 2.2k words
• #326 Then There Were Two 2.2k words
• #327 Avaritia 3.1k words
• #328 The Last Visit 2.6k words
• #329 Ground Rules 2.7k words
• #330 Price Of Failure 2.6k words
• #331 Invitation 2.1k words
• #332 The Second Dinner 2.2k words
• #333 The Second Dinner, Part Two 2.3k words
• #334 Provoking Ire 2.4k words
• #335 Carnage 2.2k words
• #336 Aurors Office 2.1k words
• #337 Changes To Come 2.4k words
• #338 Things At Home 2.1k words
• #339 Sharing A Secret 2.3k words
• #340 The Azkaban Transport 2.2k words
• #341 Storm & Pursuit 2.2k words
• #342 Visible Vigilante 2.1k words
• #343 Two Tracks Merging 1.9k words
• #344 Converging Paths? 2k words
• #345 Nurmengard 2.1k words
• #346 Two Met, One Left 2.2k words
• #347 Für das Größere Wohl 2.1k words
• #348 Visit To The Ministry 2.4k words
• #349 Weeding Out 2.1k words
• #350 Sneaking On 2.2k words
• #351 Interrogation 2.1k words
• #352 He Strikes Again? 2k words
• #353 The Paper Slip 2.1k words
• #354 Recruitment 2.2k words
• #355 Online Meeting 2.2k words
• #356 Recalling Past Events 2.1k words
• #357 Everyone Lies 2.2k words
• #358 Back-And-Forth 2.1k words
• #359 Leaving Rest To Dumbledore 2.1k words
• #360 Tough Conversation 2.1k words
• #361 Explosive Greetings 2.1k words
• #362 Gather Info, Part Beetle 1.9k words
• #363 Peace, Not For Long 2.2k words
• #364 Ten Galleon Bet 2.1k words
• #365 Wizengamot Shock 2.1k words
• #366 The Advent of War 1.9k words
• #367 Lead Up Travel 2.1k words
• #368 Cursed Fire 2.1k words
• #369 Eye For An Eye 2.1k words
• #370 Exhausted 2.2k words
• #371 The No-No Word 2.1k words
• #372 Inside Man 1.7k words
• #373 I'm The One Who Knocks 2.3k words
• #374 Bringin The Family Together 2k words
• #375 Talk About Taboo 2.2k words
• #376 Taboo Hunting 2k words
• #377 Pink Chalk Glows 2k words
• #378 Finally Visible 2.4k words
• #379 Making Preparations 2.1k words
• #380 Funds From The Vampire 2.1k words
• #381 Leaving The Nest 2.7k words
• #382 I'm Not A Good Person 2.2k words
• #383 Living Independently 2.1k words
• #384 The Price Paid 2.1k words
• #385 Another Hunt 2.4k words
• #386 Fifth Capture 2.4k words
• #387 Another Hunt? 2.1k words
• #388 Let's Dance 2.2k words
• #389 COLD 2.1k words
• #390 Another Assault 2.1k words
• #391 A Successful Assault 1.9k words
• #392 Various Offerings 2.1k words
• #393 Shoulda Just Asked 2.1k words
• #394 Finding Her 2.2k words
• #395 The Occasional Thought 2.3k words
• #396 Cut Short 2.4k words
• #397 Gathering Intel 1.9k words
• #398 Always Prep-ing 2.1k words
• #399 Cicada - Mantis - Oriole 2k words
• #400 400! 2.4k words
• #401 I Did It! 2.1k words
• #402 Another Christmas 2.3k words
• #403 Plan To Attack 2.2k words
• #404 Visitors To The Village 2.3k words
• #405 Trapped & Isolated 2.1k words
• #406 Sounding The Sirens 2.3k words
• #407 Another One? 2.1k words
• #408 Promise & Peace 2.3k words
• #409 How To Get In? 2.1k words
• #410 Demands & Reunion 2.1k words
• #411 A Chaotic Choice 1.9k words
• #412 Getting In 2.2k words
• #413 Getting In Again 2.1k words
• #414 Vigilantes 2.1k words
• #415 They Have A Deal 2.3k words
• #416 Providing Information 2k words
• #417 Entering The Castle 2.4k words
• #418 Securing Asset 2.1k words
• #419 Delivery, Door, Death 2.1k words
• #420 Limbo 2.2k words
• #421 High Speed Chase 2.1k words
• #422 Snake, Curse, Dagger 2.3k words
• #423 Injuries 2.3k words
• #424 Untitled 2.1k words
• #425 Vault Healing 2.2k words
• #426 Plan of Action 2.3k words
• #427 Second Match-Up 2.1k words
• #428 Reunion, Blood v Blood 2.2k words
• #429 Beheadings 2.3k words
• #430 Endgame Starts 2.2k words
• #431 Risk & Provocations 2k words
• #432 First Cut 2k words
• #433 Last Cut 2.2k words
• #434 Final Cut 2.2k words
• #435 Waking Up In a White Room 2.4k words
• #436 Freedom At Last 3.1k words
• #437 One More Left 2.6k words

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

• Overall Rate
• Writing Quality
• Updating Stability
• Story Development
• Character Design
• world background

Review #2 [FictionOnlyReaders' Author Review] At the time of this post, this review is the 269th review of this story. (200+Nice!) Current Story stats: Regular chapters: 125 || Aux chapters: 1 Collections: 11.55K || Views: 3.47M || Average Word Count: 3.36K || Rating: 4.84 Stars My rating: 5 STARS || Reason: Because I like my story, that's it. My review was too long and wasn't being accepted, so I have broken it down and put it in comments. Please go down to see the rest. Just like always, Review, comment, add to the library and share this fic. Thx. Regards, FictionOnlyReader (LET'S GO!)

Sad to see youre not doing kuroko no basuke fic anymore....hope you can get back on thst soon 😭😭. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

It's a little sad that you can't still write or update on your KnB Fanfic after waiting for more than 5 months. I guess I'll read this for now for the time being while I write my Paimon fanfic. Here's some 5 star from me. I'm grad that you're still doing okay.

Normally I just read and don't leave any comments but I had to leave a review for this one. This fanfiction started off with a decent idea, waking up in a wealthy pure blood child and practicing magic like a fanfiction addict would. The author ruined the fanfiction for me when the mc: 1. Had a magic core and goes through 'growth' phases at certain ages. 2. Chose to go to Hogwarts when as a Harry Potter fan you know the teachers suck and the standards are terrible. 3. Made wands the devil, where the mc is afraid of using a wand as it will stop his core's growth. 4. Uses and practices wandless magic in front of students and at students without a cover (his fake wand which he left in his room for some reason) while saying he's trying to keep it a secret (I guess he forgot about all the portraits spying too). 5. Reused lines from the original story even though it takes place like a year earlier (I guess Dumbledore uses the same lines every year now) 6. very bad romance with a 12 year old.

There are a couple of things I really dislike about this story: I absolutely loathe transmigration with memory / identity loss tropes. I believe it's the lowest form of fanfiction. There's something very off about the sentence structure and grammar that makes this story uncomfortable to read. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

The author had a generally good idea but he ruined it because he had to throw roadblocks like an idiot. I feel very justified to say I should’ve never picked up this story.

So my review was deleted but the countless of 5/5 reviews that are from the same accounts stay? Story HAD potential but it became garbage. You can skip the trash parts aka the vault parts and still know everything so you wont miss anything. MC gets embarrassed by Wormtail and loses an eye lol i wouod go more into detail eith how bad this fic is wnd how much of s waste of time it is but slim chance anyone will read this review lol too many reviews and so many repeated 5/5 reviews that wont get deleted but mine will lol garbage story

the author wanted to create an MC Op in the Hp world, but he didn't want this MC to change the canon, so you ask me how the author compensated for the presence of the MC and the canon remaining the same? the potters survived and had 2 children, so he justified that it's "AU" and in all the remarkable moments in the canon it happened the same because it's an "Au" or the MC becomes incredibly dumb or he becomes weak in moments that you need to use the power

Buddy, after reading the first two chapters of this fan fiction, there is only one thing I want to say. Thank you. Finally a character who is not overpowered and doesn't start practicing the goddamn unforgivables by the age of 11 and actually experiences difficulty in harnessing his accidental magic. Just like you I am an avid reader of the Harry Potter fabrications and have read close to 800 of them. Out of all of them, I only managed to find less than 10 which explored the journey of learning magic realistically. So the fact that you are doing just that and addressing issues that other fanfics don't usually deal I'm like guilt, is a huge win in my opinion. Your grammar is near perfect and the conversations font seem forced, so I am sticking with this. Hope you don't hit a writer's block on this book as well, cause I like your other fabric and have still not given up on it.

a whole lot of build up with zero pay off, author and MC are far far too passive to the point where it's just the Harry potter books with a side character who should be and could be doing more. look at the last 20 chapters and you'll find countless readers complaining and frankly the author deserves far worse. nothing but a drought of creativity.

This just isn't a very good story, I don't know what else to say. The focus of the story is also constantly wasted on a lot of nonsensical or unimportant stuff.

The Time Travel BS at Chapter 306 307 and so on ruined the entirety of the story that has been written and from then on. You may not agree with me and that's fine, but anytime time travel is used like that to further the plot and bring change to the MC feels VERY VERY cheap and forced.

Reveal spoiler

it started of good but quickly became completely dog shi.

this story is so incredible that I can’t even begin to describe it, the details are perfect, you feel like you’re in the scene and imagining the world and the work behind being a good wizard, it’s not just sitting around and nobody is ready more can enter my mind, it is so perfect that it hurts to wait for new chapters, congratulations author you are amazing.

Spoiler Warning: The first ~300 ch were fine its the where he goes back into the sin vault again it goes downhill, for me. I especially dont like the future version of mc comes and helps the past mc. It just seems like lazy writing to fix his plot hole. And i hate that the future self just memory wipes the whole interaction and then mind controls his past self, becuase from therefore we dont know how much is the originals mc’s decisions or the futures mc mind manipulation. We dont know the lasting effect the mind manipulation will have on the mc, basically creating a different character in my opinion.

why would I read this knowing the author is someone who leaves his work unfinished ? this review may be unrelated to this story but I can't bring myself to read anymore of your work. I was huge fan of your KNB fanfic and I liked it very much, seriously, it's a wonder to me how many people keep reading this fiction knowing your irresponsibility to your fans and work.

Started good and was going that way until the author decided to add vaults. Vaults were nice till the sin vault where he got fckd up royally and didn't even noticed it for a along time, as if it wasn't enough he got and infected himself again with sin vault (which has the seven sins and each one of those sins affects his si-ssy personality till he gets his 2 girl friends.) Overall wasted potential for an amazing story. I recommend to simply leave it.

I was a Patreon for a few months and really liked this the first like 160 chapters. It was fun to read about the vaults, magic, and Quinn as a person. However the author now is clearly trying to milk Patreon given how lengthy the social fillers were and fourth year, as well as the stupidity of Quinn KNOWING Voldemort’s plans fully and yet still had no plans to get rid of the horcruxes and the war effort before it could escalate. Not to mention we follow canon events and timeline and of course he would end up getting involved with the trio. Add onto a very annoying romance set up with unlikable one dimensional teenage girls - basically no personality and can use one adjective to describe them, and I’m no longer interested. Now it’s just not worth anyone’s time

HP: A Magical Journey

• School Life

HP: A Magical Journey novel is a popular light novel covering Romance, Fantasy, Adventure, Action, School Life genres. Written by the author FictionOnlyReader. 438 chapters have been translated and translation of other chapters are in progress.

[A Harry Potter Fanfiction]

Follow Quinn West, who finds himself in the world of Harry Potter, but are things as they seem, is the world he has landed in the same as the one he once read about.

Will Quinn able to find his way in this new world? Will he ever be able to feel like he belongs here?

What opportunity would the magic of this world provide him? Will it lead him to the light or drown him in the dark?

Tag along as Quinn makes his way into the world of magic as he discovers the secrets behind the infinite potential behind the magic that is within his grasp.

-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-

This novel is my escape from the burnout that I suffered from my other novel. I have no solid plotline planned, there will be no definite release schedule. The reason for me writing is to improve my writing skills, light my brain cells.

As you know that there are so many Harry Potter Fanfictions out there, it is the largest FanFiction community out there, and as I write this novel, I don't have anything in my mind that isn't already out there, but I am trying to create a piece of transformative work that would pick up ideas from that wide community and create a work that would be enjoyable to read.

If you find any errors (non-standard content, ads redirect, broken links, etc..), Please let us know so we can fix it as soon as possible.

You May Also Like

Enter your email address that you used to register. We'll send you an email with a link to reset your password.

If you don’t see the email, check other places it might be, like your junk, spam, social, or other folders.

Webnovel Author: FictionOnlyReader - Fanfic&Novel Collection

• 0 d Continuous Writing
• 37.3 h of Reading
• 266 Read books

FictionOnlyReader

I am but an author. The story my body and readers my blood. I have cliffed myriads of readers. Unknown to them. Nor known to others. Yet these hands will always write. So, I say.. Let's have some fun.

Moments 374

Hi! I have fixed the formatting. I don't know why this is happening, but I'll be double-checking from now on before posting. Chapters often don't update on the app, so that's why it might not be showing up correctly,

ch 229 CH_7.11 (229)

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

VOTE for the upload schedule poll at the chapter's end

ch 218 Interlude_6.1 (218)

LIKE HERE TO VOTE FOR THIS OPTION (2)

2) Upload chapters 1 at a time throughout the week. There are two things to note: A) I'll revert to [3 chapters /week together] during combat chapters, and will notify about it beforehand. B) IMPORTANT!! I CAN NOT commit on specific day schedule (Like [Mon, Wed, Fri] or [Tue, Thurs, Sat]) because that's not how I write—so if we go option (2), the chapters will be uploaded when they're completed, which will be entirely depend on how productive I'm that week.

LIKE HERE TO VOTE FOR THIS OPTION (1)

1) The usual, no change. [3 chapter/week, all together]

Takuma_ANBU_Jim.el

Kakashi was an ANBU Captain, not the ANBU Commander.

"Tell the ANBU commander to send me Hatake and his team along with Uchiha Itachi if he's not on the team anymore." Hiruzen sensed Ichi's reluctance and confusion. "It will be good to have a Uchiha and the Sharingan to be there when I meet Danzo. I can't bring Uchiha Fugaku with me, and he might not trust my words, he might not trust his son, but he will trust Hatake."

TOR_Cover_Kodah_Solid

TOR_Cover_Kodah_Scene

They're big enough that Takuma doesn't have to be constantly worry about chakra resource management during the fight. Which is a luxury that not all shinobi have. More about it is already written in the future chapters.

'Just how much chakra does he have?' she thought.

A picture is indeed worth a thousand words

The black-clad shinobi turned. A startling surprise crossed his eyes as he saw Takuma. The surprise made the man slow, and he couldn't avoid the punch into the stomach. The man flew back like a cannonball and slammed into a burning tent that still stood.

Thanks! I actually think characters are my weak point. There are many more writers who do characters, character motivation, and character emotions much better than me. I realize that characters are what hooks the reader as if they're not invested in the characters, the readers won't care no matter what amazing stuff the characters are doing—and I consider myself lucky that my style of writing helps me accomplish the character building through sheer quantity of time spent with characters rather than short but very effective character portrayal. Like, after spending nearly 400K words with Takuma, it will be difficult to not have some form of investment in him.

ch 175 CH_6.4 (175)

— Takuma doesn't know about the changes that have took place in this world, and he wasn't sure when the original events would've have opened if the timeline hadn't changed. But he couldn't use terms like "will/would/might/may" or anything that adds a speculative tone. To make sure his words were taken seriously, he termed everything as if it was already happened or about to happen without fail. — The reason Takuma didn't mention Obito is because Takuma doesn't remember him being part of the massacre. Like many, he thinks that Itachi did the entire execution alone because that was what the manga said for a very long time and unlike the anime, Obito's role reveal went by quick— (In anime, they did the entire Izumi things and stuff, which was absent in the manga.) — In this chapter, Itachi left without saying anything to Mikoto. The same string events as canon happened. He was somehow contacted by Shisui who was about to die, they met, and Shisui told Itachi about what happened. — After meeting with Shisui, Itachi went to meet with Sasuke to establish an alibi. As far as everyone was concerned, he was with Sasuke. — A very subtle indication about how Sasuke perceives Fugaku, and signs of his inferiority complex in regards to Itachi. Fugaku had praised Sasuke when he successfully performs the Great Fireball Jutsu—but as soon as they return home, Fugaku is totally focused on Itachi and seemingly has no time Sasuke. Sauske, a child, doesn't know the entire story and will think that Fugaku values Itachi more than him. — Shisui's Kotoamatsukami doesn't fade away at his death. Fugaku and other Uchiha bigwigs still have their minds altered—of course, things might change due to other factors.

ch 171 Interlude_5.1 (171)

Well, them knowing about the ins-and-outs of the police force, only the readers know that, Takuma doesn't know how that links in; it's not Narcotics Taskforce is a secret operation, they are regularly featured in the newspapers.— Second, about not recalling any other organization. Kishimoto did a great job with the structure of the world, but he also needed to keep everything focused on the plot and thus ROOT was the only major org, but if you remember in the Land of Waves arc, the first enemy Team-7 meets are a pair of shinobi who try to assassinate Tazuna (the bridge builder). As I mentioned in the original response: there are going to be plenty of assassin organization in a world like Naruto. — Third, I 100% understand where you're coming from when you mention "occurred inside the village," but my view of the villages is closer to our normal cities (close, not same). The Hidden Villages might be filled with shinobi and are secure, but the bad guys are also shinobi. In my head, every Hidden Village is filled with spies from other villages and parties who have vested interest in knowing what's happening. — so my vision is that it's not impossible to infiltrate Hidden Villages— Hidden Sand did infiltrate in secret before the full-on invasion (despite how the Pain Arc showed that there's an invisible surveillance layer around Hidden Layer) —— I completely understand how given the canon world some things might seem odd, and they might be truly be odd because I probably have modified the world too much for this fic, and the readers don't have the proper context because I straight up didn't give enough.

ch 168 CH_5.25 (168)

I haven't thought about what I'm going to do next. — But whatever I do, the first requirement is that I love the source media. My works tend to be longfics, taking 1-2 years to complete, so if I don't like the original, I don't think I will ever write. Fortunately, I'm an easily pleased person, so I tend to enjoy most things which are done reasonably well. — Now, I'm hesitant to write pursue TV shoes as long ones are usually stretched out due to TV ratings and the lore becomes twisted and convoluted (additionally, I currently don't want to write non-fantasy). — As for Lord of the Rings, I have neither seen the movies, nor read the books because they got too hyped for me and I'm scared that I will be disappointed. — One Piece, it's not complete, so that's out (I need the source material to be complete), and I have only read like half of it — Game of Thrones: Oh boy, I don't know if I can keep all the political dynamics in my head and write a story of that level of complexity. Currently, if I write a GoT fic, it's going to be a kingdom building story based on introducing better technology/knowledge/techniques. — Lord of Mysteries: I'm hella interested. — Tower of Gods: I followed the manhwa for a bit, but it's been a while. I will have to see what's it like right now. — Grimm: Hmm, I have watched it, and it did like it, and I think I could come up with some enjoyable stuff if I put some thought into it, but it did end up becoming a bit convoluted at the end, though its still a good world to explore. — If you ask me what I want to do next? Hmm... I would like to do something sci-fi, or maybe something with a very expansive world, or probably something which is not as intense as The Outsider's Resolve.

I personally disagree. First of all, thinking that a super secretive organization would target him over a drug raid is heights of ego/narcissism(or sense of self-importance). Takuma has been in the world long enough that he has lost any self-delusion of the "Main Character Syndrome"— as far Takuma is concerned, he's just another shinobi trying to progress in his career. Second, no one is going to believe that ROOT couldn't take out a genin like Takuma. That's like spitting in ROOT's face. Third, I believe the reason it seems that ROOT would be the obvious culprit is because or our perception of ROOT being the only organization possessing "assassins." But in the context of the world, there is are going to be plenty of assassination organizations. There are plenty of for-hire rogue shinobi and organizations. Zabuza and Haku is one of them. Akatsuki before their entire tailed-beast stealing plan was a merc organization, and they even got jobs from Hidden Stone. It's only logical that there are going to be other orgs who provide certain services. Fourth, it's a huge leap in logic. Everyone including Takuma will look at the facts. They will think why a target was put on Takuma? The obvious reason is his job— then they will look what did he do— he lead a raid on a drug farm, directly hurting the drug trade— and through that, they will think that a drug lord put the hit on Takuma. ROOT, a very high-level organization, who are involved in matters of huge importance wouldn't go after someone relatively unimportant like Takuma. At least, that was my chain of thoughts as I was writing this scenario.

"There was a fourth one, the iryo-nin of the group. I killed him first to take away their healer. And I made sure he was dead. So, he didn't just get up and leave. Someone took him. Come on!" Takuma couldn't help but yell. "Do we have anything? Anything at all."

This story is stolen. The original story is titled [Path of Ruin] by Rictus on SpaceBattles. The thief here has the gall to write a 5-star review and saying that they "worked hard" writing this story. Read the story [Path of Ruin] by the original author on SpaceBattles. The original author [Rictus] doesn't charge any money for his writing and all of its is readily available in its entirety on SpaceBattles. Those who're seeing this review, please report this theft attempt. That is all.

Movies · Darkest_Sage

Stolen story from AppoApples. Posted without permission. Not attributed. For those are reading these reviews, please go read at the TRUE author's profile at FFN (fanfiction(dot)net) or at Ao3(archiveofourown(dot)org) I implore those who read this, leave a review like this— report the story and report the profile.

HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Book&Literature · Uhes4bu4iejh4h

Stolen story from DarknessEnthroned. Posted without permission. Not attributed. For those are reading these reviews, please go read at the TRUE author's profile at FFN (fanfiction(dot)net) or at their website (alltheblankcanvas(dot)com) I implore those who read this, leave a review like this— report the story and report the profile.

HHHHHHHHHHH

Takuma — by Incraze

A/N: Something I wasn't expecting: One of the Patrons, Incraze, drew a FanArt for Takuma. Here it is for everyone to enjoy:

Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other

© 2024 China Literature Limited

About Newsroom Brand Guideline

Translators & Editors Commercial Audio business Help & Service DMCA Notification Online service Vulnerability Report

Download Apps Be an Author Help Center Privacy Policy Terms of Service Affiliate Q&A